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  1. Comment by SYDMAN

    kaya pala nawala ka ng matagal.

    hmmm…

    i’m going to critic this “piece” in a way na hindi ako matatakot mabugbog dahil mindset ko nasa capiz ka at hindi ako mabubugbog.

    hmmm…

    what can i possibly say to hurt your ego.

    for starters hindi naman sila ganung ka-alienating since you established early that they are geeks. look dude, if this isn’t publishable i’ll crap on your style early.

    pero this could work. you can sell these to star, pdi, and bulletin.

    yun nga lang, medyo high end siya and merong mga copy errors (you don’t dash when you say i-___) medyo magulo.

    pero its good though. the malaya character is good here. the brewing love-hate malaya-pie angle could work. the askal needs to further define his identity while the best friend looks promising.

    you go girl!

  2. Comment by ACRobles

    Geeks!? Sinong geeks!? Walang geeks dito ha. Baka ikaw ang geek… you… GEEK!!!

    Haha! Thanks for stopping by Syd. Pero i’ll be in Manila soon so mag tagotago ka na… my ego is looking for some payback.

  3. Comment by anonymous

    tama si sydGIRLYman, geeks sila. halluur. reference pa lang sa tekken at star wars.

  4. Comment by ACRobles

    wow ha… anonymous… pa mysterious effect ka ha… sana magpakilala ka naman…

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